Message 81

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Subject: Cap Machines
Date: Sun, 17 Mar 2002
From: Denis Thievin
To: sre@sreweb.com


Hi Domenic:

A couple of quick suggestions for your otherwise
beautiful web page at
www.sreweb.com/sre/espresso_machines.htm:

"... hold a stream jar by it's handle" should be ITS
handle (no apostrophe in the possessive case).
"... the quantity of coffee used for a shot effects
proper brewing" likely was meant to be AFFECTS
brewing, although it's difficult to know for sure.

Aside from those constructive criticisms, it appears
you're an expert in your field and someone who
probably has many friends who get to savour your
talents.

Denis

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